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's char i HAD to draw him. SADLY i got him wrong and i was so stupid i even forgot his whiskers, since i dont know when i will be able to upload the new version after i edit it today i will just update.
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The biggest issue to correct would be the anatomy. His left arm is misproportioned and awkwardly posed. To help convey the action of the pose, it might help to lower the elbow and raise the forarm, which would require foreshortening. The right arm disappears behind the leg and then seems to bend like it's double jointed. Also the thumb almost appears to be coming from his foot at first. The angle of his left foot should be so that we can see the top of his paw a bit better, and also pointed a little more inward so that if continued, the lines of his feet would intersect insead of being parallel.
Some of the anatomy flaws are in species features. Fossa are feline-looking carnivores, their faces look sort of like a lion mixed with a weasel [link]. Here it looks more canine, almost wolfy. Their tails are also very long and thick.
One last consideration to make would be the motion of the character. He seems to be bouncing upward, so you can make the areas of longer fur have either some pull, like if he's still moving upwards, or sort of float loosely, like if he's reached the peak of his jump. It's a subtlety that can help make it look more alive and moving.
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